Why Are you So Obsessed with me?

Another pic of Val.

There's more meaning to the pic than there appears to be.
See in something I'm thinking about writing, Valerie in high school was a bit more nerdish and shy, and there was this one guy
that kept on making her miserable, going as far as to spreading rumors about her.
So in her defense, as well as payback, she removes her glasses, let's down her hair, and enters the talent show
and sings to the guy "Obsessed" a song written by Mariah Carey. During her performance, she reveals her true colors.
A strong, independent and beautiful young woman. And her life is set much better after all of that.
If I do write the story I'm talking about, You'll get the full feel of it (I hope~ x3)
Anyways, critique, if you please~ :3
Link to the original Mariah Carey Song: [link]